Visitors bounce confused
They land, skim a “welcome / passionate team / learn more” hero, and leave without knowing who you help or what outcome you deliver.
Homepage Clarity Pack · UK Ltd service SMBs
Your homepage is live.
Visitors still ask “what do you actually do?”
Fixed-scope messaging audit and rewrite — written delivery in 48 hours from a complete intake. Honest positioning. No calls. No agency theatre.
- en-GB throughout
- AI-assisted · humans at Humblefox review final copy
- One written revision on Core packs
The problem
Vague headlines, feature dumps, and weak proof kill enquiries before they start.
You know the offer — the page doesn’t
The facts live in your head (and in sales calls). The homepage still talks in adjectives and service lists instead of audience, outcome, and next step.
Agency retainers aren’t the fix
You don’t need a rebrand or a six-week discovery. You need clearer messaging, written down, ready to paste — at a fixed price.
Packages
Fixed scope. Fixed price. Pick your wedge.
Buy Now via PayPal, or email hello@humblefox.co as backup. 48 hours from complete intake. Written delivery — no calls.
Clarity Snapshot
£149
Written homepage messaging audit + outline
- Audit of your current homepage messaging
- Recommended structure
- Headline / section outline (you implement)
- en-GB · written delivery
No rewrite included. Ideal if your team will draft from a clear brief.
Buy Now · Snapshot £149Recommended
Homepage Clarity Pack (Core)
£299
Snapshot + full homepage rewrite, paste-ready
- Everything in Clarity Snapshot
- Full rewrite of hero + main sections
- Paste-ready for your CMS
- Before/after notes on changes
- One written revision within 5 working days
Core + one service page
£399
Core rewrite plus one named service / landing page
- Everything in Core (£299)
- Rewrite of one named service or landing page
- Same paste-ready format
- One written revision within 5 working days
Name the extra page on intake (e.g. “VAT Returns” or “Managed IT”).
Choose Core + page · £399Every package: UK English · honest positioning (no invented credentials) · written delivery — no calls.
How it works
Four steps. No discovery Zoom.
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Pay
Use the Buy Now PayPal link for your package (above), or email hello@humblefox.co if you prefer to confirm first. Include your name, company, and website URL.
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Complete the intake
Short written intake after payment. You supply facts, offers, proof points, and constraints. The 48-hour clock starts when the intake is complete.
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We deliver
Within 48 hours of a complete intake — Markdown, Google Doc, or Word (your preference). Clear before/after notes included.
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One written revision
On £299 / £399 packages: one round of written revisions within 5 working days of delivery if needed.
Before / after
What clearer messaging looks like
Same fictional bookkeeping homepage — weak clarity vs clearer messaging.
Before weak clarity
Headline
Welcome to Northline Bookkeeping
Subhead
We offer a range of financial services for businesses of all sizes.
CTA
Learn more
What’s unclear: Who it’s for, what outcome they get, what to do next, and any real proof.
After clearer messaging
Headline
Bookkeeping that keeps UK trades paid and HMRC-ready
Subhead
Fixed monthly bookkeeping for contractors and small building firms — so you know your numbers without living in spreadsheets.
CTA
See packages · Email us your last return
What changed: Specific audience + outcome; clear next step; proof only if the client can stand behind it.
Illustrative example — fictional business, for format only.
Boundaries
What’s not included
Fixed scope means saying no clearly. You supply the facts. We shape them into clearer homepage messaging. We do not invent what you cannot stand behind.
- Design, branding, or CMS implementation
- SEO technical work, ads, or ongoing retainers
- Competitor deep-dives beyond what’s publicly visible on your site
- Fake testimonials, case studies, or “social proof” we invent
- Video calls, workshops, or strategy retainers
- Unlimited revisions or open-ended copywriting
FAQ
Straight answers
Is this AI-generated copy?
AI-assisted drafting; humans at Humblefox review and own the final wording. You remain responsible for facts, compliance, and claims about your business. We will not invent credentials or results.
Do I need a sales call?
No. Delivery is written only — email / shared docs. No discovery Zooms, no obligatory calls.
When does the 48-hour clock start?
From a complete intake — not from payment alone. Incomplete answers pause the clock until you reply.
What’s the revision policy?
On the £299 and £399 packages: one round of written revisions within 5 working days of delivery. Clarity Snapshot (£149) is audit + outline only — no rewrite revision round.
Will you invent testimonials or results?
No. You supply proof points. If you don’t have them, we write clear messaging without fake social proof. Honesty beats hollow claims.
How do I pay?
Use the Buy Now PayPal links on this page for your package. Prefer to confirm first? Email hello@humblefox.co with package, name, company, and website URL.
Who is this for?
UK Ltd service SMBs whose homepage is live but unclear — bookkeepers, consultants, agencies, trades with a service offer, professional services. Not a fit for consumer apps chasing viral growth metrics.
Get started
Clearer homepage messaging — without the agency theatre.
Choose your package with Buy Now, then complete the short intake. Delivery within 48 hours of complete answers. Email is fine as a backup.
Payment details
- Buy Now
- PayPal links above for £149 / £299 / £399 — fastest path
- Backup
- Email hello@humblefox.co with package · name · company · website URL
- From
- Humblefox · hello@humblefox.co · humblefox.co
Prefer Core? Use Buy Now · Core £299. Snapshot and Core + page links sit in the pricing section. Questions first? Email works fine.